Wow, it seems like I'm in my mood to write in this blog. As mas Dalih said, in writing we should not only tell the reader but we have to show it. What is the different between tell and show ? Well, at first I also confused about the difference but what I got is-- telling is only give the general idea and showing is let the reader imagine what are you write about with the five senses that human have.That five senses are sight, smell, taste, hearing and touch.
Sight ( describe the appearance of your favorite place)
My favorite place is "Kubuki room", it is my private room in my house. I love this room where I can hear rain drops peacefully and when I open the window I clearly see the blue sky and get pure air. I took one bookcase there so I can put any novels. When I got boring I always went in this room and did what I want to did. Well, now I miss this room so much, I miss the peaceful air.
Smell (describe the stench of something that disgust you)
I think my smell sense didn't deal with everything that smell too strong. The most smell that I hate is durian, well maybe it is weird because a lot of people like this killer. When I get this smell I fell like something stab my head and make it dizzy.
Taste (describe the taste of your favorite food)
Talking about taste it means talking about food. I like cooking so I love eating too. Actually, I love every food in the world. One that I love so much is Cheese-choco larva, it is two layers of chocolate cake with mozzarella cheese in the middle, covered with dark chocolate cream. The cheese will be melt and mix with dark chocolate cream when you bite it. It's really daebak (re: awesome).
Hearing (describe the sound you first heard this morning)
Reason by Hoobastank was the first sound that I heard this morning, every morning actually. This is my daily alarm tone. The beat of this music is so energetic and will get louder and louder if I don't stop it. This sound always success wake me up in the morning.
Touch ( describe the texture of your shoes)
My shoes feels smooth since its made from elastic-leather. It has gold-ribbon accent in front and the sole is elastic because it made from rubber. Honestly, this shoes is not comfortable because I bought it in wrong size :(
I thank to God for everything He gives to me :)
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